this is about everyone~ please read!, by ma_chapa3xD
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under dispise
under anger
under jelousy
under hate
under everything thats worse than man's fate
is a candle that has
love
happiness
faith
hope!
that has a voice that tells you to preservere
and go on
wispering
'you can do it! i know you can!!'
but then there is the finger
that dares go near
and tampers with it
you loose hope
you loose love
you loose
you
everything that you built up was going great
then someone came to play with it
to test you
to ruin you
then sometimes he won
your all burned out
'give up' he says
'you might as well have no use here after all'
'you're nothing to anyone. remind me why are you still
here?'
but then the finger gets burnt himself
by whom?
by what?, you might ask
by the one true one
the lighter
He brings you to life so that you can be with him and always
be together
forever
may you always be in someones heart
for you will never blow out with Him
dont give up
he says as he wipes away your tears
dont give up
'but ive been so bad'
i know but its all right i promise you
it's gonna be all right
always |
Posted: 2009-04-22 22:25:59 UTC |
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2009-04-11 18:28:10 | ma_chapa3xD |
hey !!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!
i hope i got every mistake and thanks for notifing me! :"D |
2009-04-20 22:18:34 | Azure Faye |
Ave Maria Nina! Genius! I loved it! it really does apply to everyone. Just one thing; in the 6th stanza, you misplelled 'burnt'. Yeah...
Tu amiga, Azure |
2009-04-22 22:25:37 | ma_chapa3xD |
:"D i cont believe i did that! hahaha! thnks azure! your awesome!
~rachella |
2009-12-04 01:18:47 | Emma_Bee |
Muzzy, ur a poetic Genious!! :D come cheeck out my poems! |