this is about everyone~ please read!

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By ma_chapa3xD

under dispise under anger under jelousy under hate under everything thats worse than man's fate is a candle that has love happiness faith hope! that has a voice that tells you to preservere and go on wispering 'you can do it! i know you can!!' but then there is the finger that dares go near and tampers with it you loose hope you loose love you loose you everything that you built up was going great then someone came to play with it to test you to ruin you then sometimes he won your all burned out 'give up' he says 'you might as well have no use here after all' 'you're nothing to anyone. remind me why are you still here?' but then the finger gets burnt himself by whom? by what?, you might ask by the one true one the lighter He brings you to life so that you can be with him and always be together forever may you always be in someones heart for you will never blow out with Him dont give up he says as he wipes away your tears dont give up 'but ive been so bad' i know but its all right i promise you it's gonna be all right always

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April 11, 2009 02:28!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

nicely done. this has some mistakes buu i sure feel you

April 11, 2009 18:28ma_chapa3xD

hey !!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!
i hope i got every mistake and thanks for notifing me! :"D

April 15, 2009 16:10!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

I LIKE YOUR STYLE! KEEP IT UP!!!

April 20, 2009 22:18Azure Faye

Ave Maria Nina! Genius! I loved it! it really does apply to everyone. Just one thing; in the 6th stanza, you misplelled 'burnt'. Yeah...
Tu amiga, Azure

April 22, 2009 22:25ma_chapa3xD

:"D i cont believe i did that! hahaha! thnks azure! your awesome!
~rachella

this is really good!

December 4, 2009 01:18Emma_Bee

Muzzy, ur a poetic Genious!! :D come cheeck out my poems!