A ROSE FROM THE DEAD FOR THE DEAD

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By !!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!! •

Within my bed alone I slept I saw a beautiful white world sink into the dark with dread As if a demon upon my chest has crept I sank beneath the earth and dwelt amongst the annelid But as time went by I felt the warmth of the sun welcoming me to the surface once again. So I fought with all my might to get back to the world I could barely remember And found there is more to this life than the cold month of December.

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April 15, 2009 18:30!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

NOT FINNISHED

April 16, 2009 06:00papaya

The title is pretty cool!

April 18, 2009 03:02Natural_beauty_Ashe

well it is great anyway. :)

April 18, 2009 15:36!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

thanks

April 27, 2009 21:56♥`HopeBringsSorrow`♥

its a very good poem....finished or not.... i love it!!

April 27, 2009 23:39Felicia

Love this poem, its the mood that makes me connect with it. You express passion and creativity, both outstanding quality's. Felicia Mac

May 6, 2009 23:17ma_chapa3xD

W0W oh W0Wie! that's REALLY GOOD!!! i like how you were so detailed on how you 'fell'. LOVE IT!
~Rachel Frella

July 5, 2009 02:08Azure Faye

This, like, freaked me out. Then I read it again and I was like GOD! Absolutitly fantastic....I was born in December....I wonder if that effected anything...like my brain....

July 5, 2009 22:19!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

YOU SEEM PRETTY COOL TO ME!
LOL