The Sidewalk of Life and Love, by SenSeLeSS
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It was late and dark
It was raining and cold
She was lonely
She was sad
He was heartbroken
He was alone
They finally met
On the walk home
They were both on the same side of the sidewalk
Life's sidewalk
Love's sidewalk
Once his eyes met hers
She walked closer to him
Tilted head and crossed arms
She glared at him
He returned her stares
They both knew each other's story
It had been the same one
They had no one to hold their hands
No one to walk beside them
Their hearts had been broken
That same night
They had given up on love
Sworn never to love again
Until she stared into his deep blue eyes
Until he brushed her midnight hair with his hands
Until they held hands
And walked back home
Together
On the opposite side of the sidewalk
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Posted: 2005-01-09 03:38:48 UTC |
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2005-03-28 02:28:16 | lacebutterflies |
I like how your poem tells a story.It's really good. |
2005-05-07 16:50:52 | wishing_on_stars |
I like it. It brings hope to people that there will always be a new beginning. |
2005-12-04 15:29:07 | Spiritual Beauty |
it's nice how u put it.. how the 'meant to be' interferes with our choices |
2005-12-13 09:13:09 | Crzy Angelchic |
whoa...i like it somehow. its weird...and sweet. and beautifully written...but weird. good job |
2006-08-28 22:03:36 | .:side:walk:. |
Not only do I liekt he title ( which mentions my user name, hehe) but the poem is so strong with amazing words |
2006-12-28 19:06:08 | Just Eat My Heart Out |
i really dont like it much, but i lov your stories... stick to stories |
2007-03-03 03:37:15 | liberty moon |
wow this really was wot i needed. u gave me hope at a time when i was giving up on love. |
2007-08-04 14:02:07 | User |
An great poem..I enjoy reading it so much.. ^_^ |
2008-05-16 03:18:52 | Nora Eason |
I like it, it left me wanting to hear more. |
2009-10-11 18:46:53 | raven |
i love it. it's so touching it makes me cry. literally! |
2010-03-21 22:24:06 | baya |
hmmm interesting . . . very interesting. Two broken hearts make whole you know. |