I’m losing

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By Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears* •

I’m losing the best thing, That has ever happened to me. I’m losing the happiness in my life, because I’m not the girl I want to be I’m losing my world, And the person who has my heart, I’m losing my friend, My life is falling apart. I’m losing everyone, That has ever been there. I’m losing the person Who promised he really cared. I’m losing my dream And everything that made me smile I’m losing my regret Because it was all worth while I’m losing my true love And there’s nothing I can do All these things I’m losing Because I’m losing you…

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April 20, 2009 17:37!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

THIS IS REALLY GOOD

April 21, 2009 14:00Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*

thank you

April 22, 2009 11:47CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART

this is amazing...i kinda am losing someone i love too

April 22, 2009 13:57Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*

thank you

April 28, 2009 22:25♥`HopeBringsSorrow`♥

this is a very good poem!!! it shows real emotion!! keep up the good work!!

April 29, 2009 13:05Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*

thank you

May 1, 2009 20:00true_poet

Aww this is such a good poem! Keepp it up oh btw thanks for the comment on my poem :)

May 4, 2009 14:27Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*

your welome.. anytime

May 19, 2009 21:42...

Aww, I love this, I can really relate to it and it's a great poem! Well done!! =)

May 20, 2009 12:58Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*

thank you.

May 21, 2009 20:17Gemma.

thats amaing! and thats how i'm feeling right now...

May 22, 2009 13:45Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*

im sure every body feels that way,
i feel like it all the time.

October 15, 2010 01:06raining smiles

oh man