"Missin You"

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By Candi

As i gaze at you, starin at me I think about us, how we used to be Together with one another, feelin so free But things began to change, you tried to cheat on me I had 2 leave you, i just couldn't stay Couldn't let you do that, wouldn't let you have your way You got with that other chicc, she was your nite and day She let you do whatever, with her you got away But then you parted ways, and came bacc to me I greeted you with open arms, wider than the sea You went bacc to you old ways tho, I couldn't let that be So we split up once again, you didn't deserve me So why am i here now, with thoughts of you Wondering how it would be if we could've worked through The problems that we had, our differences too I guess what i'm tying to say is, Baby i miss you... ~Candi~ 2004

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March 1, 2005 09:50Flaviena

its beautiful..

May 6, 2005 00:35Candi

Thanx for the feedbacc, i appreciate it.

June 12, 2005 16:14Loreleen

Awww this one is so sweet...good job!

June 29, 2005 18:53XRebzX

that is really sweet
check out mine ppl

August 16, 2005 13:04kelly

this is really good. i love poem's that rhyme and have so much meaning!check out mine too!

August 23, 2005 21:04Stacey

I love this poem! good job

November 29, 2005 01:44Sweet_N_Simple

I FEEL SO SORRY FOR U
I HOPE THAT MADE U FEEL LOTS BETTER

December 6, 2005 15:59Crimson_Tide915

Very nice poem i like the rythem you put into this poem.... You should check out some of mine I will be more than delighted to have your feedback

March 9, 2007 10:23FarmGirl

nice, beautiful and sweet

March 27, 2007 15:50Crystal

very sweet COMMENT ME!!!

March 24, 2008 01:58Craney

Always forgive, always persever. You truly love me him. But I don't care off him. I believe that you are the sweetest candy one can only dream of.
Ahhhhhh

February 21, 2009 17:28Gutta Chic

I know how you feel

March 9, 2009 00:24SAMIRA JONES

THIS IS LOVLEY