THE DRAINE ANGEL , by !!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!! Subscribe to rss feed for !!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

purity some say with direction some say with out
born to this world as if a clean white sponge dropped into a
vile wast land with open eyes and a clear mind to all that
was to come 

my inferiority to this land was a strength unknown to me nor
man 

marked with hate i slowly died as my soul cried deep down
inside

darkened with pain all sense of life seemed to be going down
the drain

and as confusion whirled through my life it only became more
evident to see the ravaging infection within

and even though this heart became so empty so lonely in the
silence of devastation my directions only became clearer

to heal or not to heal that is the question!!

so by the cleansing of heart once again i escaped the long
arms of deaths embrace!!!

04/28/09

Posted: 2009-04-30 03:38:06 UTC

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2009-04-30 04:52:17Chalan
I like how this one was written. it starts off so dark and then near the end of the poem it offers a glimmer of hope. Nicely done! Thank you for all your comments on my poems. I really appreciate it!! :)

2009-05-04 14:02:01Ashley Reneƫ *Raining Tears*
wow this is amazing! i love it!

2009-05-14 23:10:09Felicia
Thanks for noticing my spelling errors if they are any more please tell me Thanks. Very nice poem "heal or not to heal" thats cute Felicia Mac

2009-05-15 03:39:48Natural_beauty_Ashe
thnks for your comments.i really really like this one.butis there ever one i dont enjoy reading from you.:)

2009-05-23 13:44:56CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART
This is amazing, and so true, cleansing the heart will help!! keep writting i love ur poems!!!

2009-05-31 14:50:19dispersed_sky
niceeeeeeeeeeeee appreciatible..:)