THE DRAINE ANGEL

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By !!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

purity some say with direction some say with out born to this world as if a clean white sponge dropped into a vile wast land with open eyes and a clear mind to all that was to come my inferiority to this land was a strength unknown to me nor man marked with hate i slowly died as my soul cried deep down inside darkened with pain all sense of life seemed to be going down the drain and as confusion whirled through my life it only became more evident to see the ravaging infection within and even though this heart became so empty so lonely in the silence of devastation my directions only became clearer to heal or not to heal that is the question!! so by the cleansing of heart once again i escaped the long arms of deaths embrace!!! 04/28/09

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April 30, 2009 04:52Chalan

I like how this one was written. it starts off so dark and then near the end of the poem it offers a glimmer of hope. Nicely done! Thank you for all your comments on my poems. I really appreciate it!! :)

wow this is amazing! i love it!

May 14, 2009 23:10Felicia

Thanks for noticing my spelling errors if they are any more please tell me Thanks. Very nice poem "heal or not to heal" thats cute Felicia Mac

May 15, 2009 03:39Natural_beauty_Ashe

thnks for your comments.i really really like this one.butis there ever one i dont enjoy reading from you.:)

May 23, 2009 13:44CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART

This is amazing, and so true, cleansing the heart will help!! keep writting i love ur poems!!!

May 31, 2009 14:50dispersed_sky

niceeeeeeeeeeeee appreciatible..:)