THE DRAINE ANGEL , by !!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!
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purity some say with direction some say with out
born to this world as if a clean white sponge dropped into a
vile wast land with open eyes and a clear mind to all that
was to come
my inferiority to this land was a strength unknown to me nor
man
marked with hate i slowly died as my soul cried deep down
inside
darkened with pain all sense of life seemed to be going down
the drain
and as confusion whirled through my life it only became more
evident to see the ravaging infection within
and even though this heart became so empty so lonely in the
silence of devastation my directions only became clearer
to heal or not to heal that is the question!!
so by the cleansing of heart once again i escaped the long
arms of deaths embrace!!!
04/28/09
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Posted: 2009-04-30 03:38:06 UTC |
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2009-04-30 04:52:17 | Chalan |
I like how this one was written. it starts off so dark and then near the end of the poem it offers a glimmer of hope. Nicely done! Thank you for all your comments on my poems. I really appreciate it!! :) |
2009-05-14 23:10:09 | Felicia |
Thanks for noticing my spelling errors if they are any more please tell me Thanks. Very nice poem "heal or not to heal" thats cute Felicia Mac |
2009-05-15 03:39:48 | Natural_beauty_Ashe |
thnks for your comments.i really really like this one.butis there ever one i dont enjoy reading from you.:) |
2009-05-23 13:44:56 | CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART |
This is amazing, and so true, cleansing the heart will help!! keep writting i love ur poems!!! |
2009-05-31 14:50:19 | dispersed_sky |
niceeeeeeeeeeeee appreciatible..:) |