Death in a Poem

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By a.m.b.e.r

roses are red, violets are blue, lay me down in the field next to you. tears are now plenty, and there's a lot of "so longs", but how we've gotten here is so very wrong. the days are hot and the nights are very cold, but now we're gone and our story has been told

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May 16, 2009 18:13Your Everlasting

This poem is so...well there's no word for it.Poetic,but it is more than that.I WONDER IF THERE IS A WORD FOR IT A BEAUTIFUL PERFECT WORD.

May 23, 2009 21:54Teresa

WOW!!! this poem is amazing simple but means so so so very much!! keep up the amazing work

June 3, 2009 16:31KayDe$

This is great work. I agree that it is simple yet heart-felt. This is a perfect poem. Keep it up,amber:]

October 27, 2009 20:04~Angela~

i love this poem!