who would miss me?, by Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*
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some people say i dont see the true meaning of life,
that the way i think, just isnt right
if i were to kill myself
who out there would miss me?
if you dindnt know who i was.
would i be just some lost memory?
all these questions i must ask
if you only knew how much time i have to last
im not gonna commit suicide
i just dont wanna lay these questions aside
but if you really did care and miss me
my emotions for you id share, you'll see
maybe i dont see the true meaning of life
and the way i think probably aint right
but who are you to judge the way i think
and who knows, i may be seeing a shrink
if you were to kill yourself
would you care the feelings your parents felt?
even though i dont know you
id miss and care for you, thats if you do
but anyways as life goes on
think of things you have or havent done. |
Posted: 2009-05-01 13:56:05 UTC |
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2009-05-01 13:57:38 | Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears* |
this poem is kinda crappy.. im sorry but i just couldnt find the right words.. so if you dont like it then just tell me... i think personally its confusing so.. please feel free to write what you think |
2009-05-03 04:13:33 | !!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!! |
most of the time questions with out answers can be very confusing. i personally think this is a great way to show who you really are. if someone takes the time to get to know who you really are than i'm parity sure they will miss you! ;)
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2009-05-05 01:20:48 | Invisible Poet |
Who are we to say the way you think isn't right? and i can honestly say that if you were gone i would miss you, one of the few people whos poems i actually read and am interested in... |
2009-05-18 15:33:22 | Your Everlasting |
To me it is not confusing you are writing how you feel.You have your own voice and you used that inthis poem!Good jo!!!:)!!!(: |
2009-05-29 23:42:48 | dispersed_sky |
everything has its owm position in this world and according to me one person who has created you always care about u
this is what i have learnt AND i never feel alone
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