who would miss me?

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By Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*

some people say i dont see the true meaning of life, that the way i think, just isnt right if i were to kill myself who out there would miss me? if you dindnt know who i was. would i be just some lost memory? all these questions i must ask if you only knew how much time i have to last im not gonna commit suicide i just dont wanna lay these questions aside but if you really did care and miss me my emotions for you id share, you'll see maybe i dont see the true meaning of life and the way i think probably aint right but who are you to judge the way i think and who knows, i may be seeing a shrink if you were to kill yourself would you care the feelings your parents felt? even though i dont know you id miss and care for you, thats if you do but anyways as life goes on think of things you have or havent done.

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this poem is kinda crappy.. im sorry but i just couldnt find the right words.. so if you dont like it then just tell me... i think personally its confusing so.. please feel free to write what you think

most of the time questions with out answers can be very confusing. i personally think this is a great way to show who you really are. if someone takes the time to get to know who you really are than i'm parity sure they will miss you! ;)

thank you

May 5, 2009 01:20Invisible Poet

Who are we to say the way you think isn't right? and i can honestly say that if you were gone i would miss you, one of the few people whos poems i actually read and am interested in...

i dont know, its not yall.. thank you..

May 18, 2009 15:33Your Everlasting

To me it is not confusing you are writing how you feel.You have your own voice and you used that inthis poem!Good jo!!!:)!!!(:

thank u

May 29, 2009 23:42dispersed_sky

everything has its owm position in this world and according to me one person who has created you always care about u
this is what i have learnt AND i never feel alone

thank you