Falling, by Acushla Subscribe to rss feed for Acushla

false promises and hopes;
enticed by dreams of happiness i was.
i stood upon a platform of clouds
only to realize i was falling,
falling through the open skies
past your crossed arms and
onto the cruel ground.
how could i have 
been so naive
to believe
to trust
you?
Posted: 2009-05-03 14:57:55 UTC

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2009-05-17 08:17:13!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!
I'VE BEEN THERE !!

2009-05-18 00:43:14izzy
yeah.... i've been there too. well anyway, i really liked this good work.

2009-05-18 15:18:48Your Everlasting
I've been there so many timesw it is pathetic!Gr8 job on this poem!!