Falling

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By Acushla

false promises and hopes; enticed by dreams of happiness i was. i stood upon a platform of clouds only to realize i was falling, falling through the open skies past your crossed arms and onto the cruel ground. how could i have been so naive to believe to trust you?

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I'VE BEEN THERE !!

May 18, 2009 00:43izzy

yeah.... i've been there too. well anyway, i really liked this good work.

May 18, 2009 15:18Your Everlasting

I've been there so many timesw it is pathetic!Gr8 job on this poem!!