Nothing

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By Candi

Why is "nothing" keeping you away? What is "nothing" to make you say: "I'll call you bacc," but never do And when i call u, you cop an attitude If "nothing" is keeping us apart Then why-o-why is "nothing" breaking my heart? I wish i knew what "nothing" was So i could end it just because The way i feel 4 for is true But "nothing" is making me feels so blue I wanted us to build a life I even thought about being your wife But now that "nothing" has appeared I guess it will all just end here The pain i feel is deep inside The way to cure it is to be by your side But you have "nothing" standing in our way So i guess we'll just part our own ways My love for you will always be there If you ever decide "nothing" is no longer there I'd do anything for you, all you need 2 do is ask I'd've been your first and you'da been my last But now all i can do is think and dream About all our lovely memories I'll miss you so much and long for your touch But i guess you don't care Or else "nothing" wuoldn't be there But before i go, please answer this.. Is "nothing" me? Or some other bitch?? ~Candi~ 2004

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May 7, 2005 16:59wishing_on_stars

I like the way your words portrayed raw confusion, anger, and sadness. Great poem.

December 6, 2005 16:21Crimson_Tide915

It was alright but at the end you made it to were it dident rhyme The whole poem rhymed until the end and it made me stop for a second and re read it but other than that... good poem

October 29, 2007 02:51-fruit-loop-

splendid :)

March 18, 2009 09:31Metamorphoser

did u find out what nothing was after jeeez 5 years now..i liked it.. but u should know better nothing oh wait im confused who says more nothing men or women LOL