R.I.P. WITHIN MY HEART, by !!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!
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AS LONG AS THE DOLPHINS DANCE IN THE SEA YOU SHALL BE IN MY
HEART SAFE WITH ME.
A FREE SPIRIT THAT COULD NEVER BE HELD DOWN &
A LOVE SO GRAND THAT I COULD'NT HAVE FATHOMED
EYES SO WARM THAT COULD MELT ANY COLD HEART &
HANDS SOFT AS THE AUTUMN BREEZE!SO EVAN THOUGH LIFE IS SO
FILED WITH SUCH HYPE & CRAZE. THE THOUGHT OF SEEING YOU ONCE
AGAIN HAS THE POWER TO GET ME THROUGH EVAN THE THICKEST OF
HAZE. FOR YOUR SMILE SO RADIANT NOT EVAN THE SUN COULD OUT
SHINE. SO REALLY ALL I CAN SAY IS THANK YOU FOR LOVING ME
SHARING YOUR TIME , & CHANGING WHO I TURNED OUT TO BE!
R.I.P. ♥ KIM ♨ |
| Posted: 2009-05-15 20:36:41 UTC |
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| 2009-05-17 07:34:08 | Natural_beauty_Ashe |
| i really understand where you were coming from when you wrote this.it shows so much love and expression.amaziiiiing job.:) |
| 2009-05-23 01:53:31 | ma_chapa3xD |
| wow chuck! your AMAZING! you have great taste when you write poems! im more of a romantic lover of poems and this is so sweet! :D
YOU'RE AWESOME! :)
rachella |
| 2009-05-29 13:17:37 | dispersed_sky |
| you know how to manage the words to xpress the write feelings.... |
| 2009-05-30 04:57:59 | dispersed_sky |
| thank you so much for commenting on my poems i relly appreciated it
and about your poem i think you have got a wonderful talent to xpress your feeling by these words and
seriously few ppl can handle ans reset the words in their right phases...and tht kind of people i have seen on this web site
good luck!! |
| 2012-11-01 02:23:23 | Laura Glossop |
| Such a beautiful poem, very touching x |