R.I.P. WITHIN MY HEART

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By !!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!! •

AS LONG AS THE DOLPHINS DANCE IN THE SEA YOU SHALL BE IN MY HEART SAFE WITH ME. A FREE SPIRIT THAT COULD NEVER BE HELD DOWN & A LOVE SO GRAND THAT I COULD'NT HAVE FATHOMED EYES SO WARM THAT COULD MELT ANY COLD HEART & HANDS SOFT AS THE AUTUMN BREEZE!SO EVAN THOUGH LIFE IS SO FILED WITH SUCH HYPE & CRAZE. THE THOUGHT OF SEEING YOU ONCE AGAIN HAS THE POWER TO GET ME THROUGH EVAN THE THICKEST OF HAZE. FOR YOUR SMILE SO RADIANT NOT EVAN THE SUN COULD OUT SHINE. SO REALLY ALL I CAN SAY IS THANK YOU FOR LOVING ME SHARING YOUR TIME , & CHANGING WHO I TURNED OUT TO BE! R.I.P. ♥ KIM ♨

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May 17, 2009 07:34Natural_beauty_Ashe

i really understand where you were coming from when you wrote this.it shows so much love and expression.amaziiiiing job.:)

May 20, 2009 13:02Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*

this is very well written, nice job

May 23, 2009 01:53ma_chapa3xD

wow chuck! your AMAZING! you have great taste when you write poems! im more of a romantic lover of poems and this is so sweet! :D
YOU'RE AWESOME! :)
rachella

May 23, 2009 13:42CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART

very beautifully written!!! I love it, its very sweet!! good job

May 29, 2009 13:17dispersed_sky

you know how to manage the words to xpress the write feelings....

May 30, 2009 04:57dispersed_sky

thank you so much for commenting on my poems i relly appreciated it
and about your poem i think you have got a wonderful talent to xpress your feeling by these words and
seriously few ppl can handle ans reset the words in their right phases...and tht kind of people i have seen on this web site
good luck!!

November 4, 2009 00:56connie

wow

November 12, 2009 07:29//Stillsilent//

Wow indeed!!

April 21, 2011 00:17Natural_beauty_Ashe

*tears*

November 1, 2012 02:23Laura Glossop

Such a beautiful poem, very touching x