the lion

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By sammya •

Poor hungry lion, alone in a cage, being taken along to a circus stage. no food to eat, no space to sleep, what will this poor lion do? rumbling of the engines, as he's taken away, yet his sad, sad family, have to stay. coldness of the night, keeps him awake, he once ruled the jungle, but now he withers away.

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May 16, 2009 08:36sammya

this is my first poem and i am 11 yrs old.
please say what you think of it so that I can edit it.

May 30, 2009 09:19dispersed_sky

so cute
i'm very impressed by your way of writing

i gave you "8"

May 30, 2009 09:26dispersed_sky

or i would like to give you "9"
'cause i appreciate your work
your poems are adorable
just keep it up and keep going..........................in future

May 31, 2009 20:54Your Everlasting

Sad,the poor little lion.You have a litte bit more bright things to talk about than I did when I was your age.