Naked

By Ivee •
By Ivee •
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beautiful, powerful, melancholic imagery.a really good poem.
this is really good
beautiful poem. Meaningful and heartfelt, i really love it, well done!
Its real without overwhelming you, simply its wonderful
Awesome poem...keep up your wonderful work!!
great poem... I like your writing its very artistic... Keep up the good work...(you should check out mine sometime)
Can really feel it..for my curiosity....
is something that really happened..?? Sounds sad and full of sorrow..
the girl in this poem needs God.
because he would pull her out of darknes
ths is deep and really awesome i love it i can relate to the girl in the poem
I love this poem but i am not a fan og rhymes but you used it wisley. this is a very good poem.