when i pass you through the halls

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By Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*

when i pass you through the halls my hands start shaking really bad my heart starts hammering and my mood becomes very mad you live your life everyday like what you did you didnt do you hold her hand and kiss her lips does she know the true you? does she know beneath those layers is a mean and angry man? that now every second of her future is screwed up because of what you'll plan? im sure im not the only one to whom you've probably hit but please dont hit anyone else im sure they dont wanna take your shit im sure if anyone of them goes to this school they pass you through the halls unsure of what you'll do because when i pass you through the halls my hands start shaking really bad then my heart starts hammering and my mood becomes very mad

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May 21, 2009 08:47*Psychopathic Child*

this is a great well written poem. I love it. (I'm finally slowly getting out of my writers block wrote another poem YAY!)

May 21, 2009 08:47*Psychopathic Child*

this is a great well written poem. I love it. (I'm finally slowly getting out of my writers block wrote another poem YAY!)

thats great!
ill read it
thank you for the comment

May 24, 2009 22:56Hannah George

Yeah, it's really nice.

May 25, 2009 08:44*Psychopathic Child*

your email isn't working i tried to send you an email it said this account has been discontinued or disabled

May 25, 2009 08:47*Psychopathic Child*

nevermind i figured it out sorry

its ok
thank you

May 29, 2009 23:38dispersed_sky

i can understand ur feeling xpressed in ur poem
gr8 job

thank you

June 11, 2009 07:22Invisible Poet

New poem dedicated to yourself if you wanna check it out

June 13, 2009 17:39Invisible Poet

im having a hard time reading the comment you left me on raining tears... what did you think about it

August 14, 2009 03:37Cortney shea.

omg ashley this poem is so great.. i love you as a sister... hopefully people start to commennt mine =]