when i pass you through the halls, by Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*
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when i pass you through the halls
my hands start shaking really bad
my heart starts hammering
and my mood becomes very mad
you live your life everyday
like what you did you didnt do
you hold her hand and kiss her lips
does she know the true you?
does she know beneath those layers
is a mean and angry man?
that now every second of her future
is screwed up because of what you'll plan?
im sure im not the only one
to whom you've probably hit
but please dont hit anyone else
im sure they dont wanna take your shit
im sure if anyone of them
goes to this school
they pass you through the halls
unsure of what you'll do
because when i pass you through the halls
my hands start shaking really bad
then my heart starts hammering
and my mood becomes very mad |
| Posted: 2009-05-18 14:28:12 UTC |
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| 2009-05-21 08:47:29 | *Psychopathic Child* |
| this is a great well written poem. I love it. (I'm finally slowly getting out of my writers block wrote another poem YAY!) |
| 2009-05-21 08:47:36 | *Psychopathic Child* |
| this is a great well written poem. I love it. (I'm finally slowly getting out of my writers block wrote another poem YAY!) |
| 2009-05-25 08:44:17 | *Psychopathic Child* |
| your email isn't working i tried to send you an email it said this account has been discontinued or disabled |
| 2009-05-29 23:38:31 | dispersed_sky |
| i can understand ur feeling xpressed in ur poem
gr8 job |
| 2009-06-11 07:22:45 | Invisible Poet |
| New poem dedicated to yourself if you wanna check it out |
| 2009-06-13 17:39:48 | Invisible Poet |
| im having a hard time reading the comment you left me on raining tears... what did you think about it |
| 2009-08-14 03:37:36 | Cortney shea. |
| omg ashley this poem is so great.. i love you as a sister... hopefully people start to commennt mine =] |