Down

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By Melissa

Down in a hole my cold heart slumps Never breathing ever hard I can't wait to go home and slam on my guitar Down six feet under My breathing soul is in a blunder Rain stroms screaming in my eyes Tear drops falling against the witherd wind and as always my heart break comes back again Lost to one I know And fear from ones I wish to hold Losing sight of all thing devine A thousand pound weight dropped dead on my shoulder Visions in my head that couldn't get any colder All life does is fall around me hoping to set them free, I lose them never coming to give a holler' only running and hidding from my scary face people look at me as if I were from outside space In hopes

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Id say this is my favorite so far. It seems like your poems improve with each one. Keep up the work!

April 16, 2008 06:12Sourav

Hi... It's good but could have been better...

March 24, 2010 23:49baya

you are just a boggle board game . . . all mixed up . . . just like this poem it was okay