ThE SuNsEt RaIn.........., by dispersed_sky Subscribe to rss feed for dispersed_sky

CeNtRaL IdEa---The sunset rain is the poem about the rain
drops that came on 29-may-09
In my city (you can say that it was a motivation for me). It
was quite pleasant dusk a perfect weather to write that
poem.
And furthermore it rained snowflake (I live in northern side
of India where Himalayas prevent western winds to penetrate
and cause snow flakes, it was not literally snow actually it
was a frozen water that has taken a small sphere ball
shape..) and my mood was awfully bad (or worst) I can’t
explain …I wrote that poem at the dawn of 30 May 2009 but
it was literary blackish shade all around and a best time to
write that poem 
I don’t think so that its so deeply written but its the
truth that I was in an emotional mood when I was writing
it……



The Sunset rain 

The sun sets in the west
With the hottest heat it had given
But still something had its way ‘set’
Like a harmonious season

Tiny-tiny pearl stars 
Jumped from the sky
Like there was a war
Between tines as they ‘fly’

I didn’t know what message they bought
I didn’t care what were their destinations
But something really special was sought
Inside the little hearts station

One tiny made its way to my side
To tell something really special
“We have had a gorgeous ride,
From his home to your footsteps impression”

I stared it as I didn’t believe
I was hoping it’s a dream
I was shivering ‘cause of half sleeves
My tears started to flow like a stream

I said to that tiny creature
“I have my perception as well.
You have a best feature,
That I want you to tell.

You have helped me to hide my biggest secret.
Dear you help me to run that fear
Only He knows the real reason, I regret,
‘Cause you are here to hide my tears 

Parampreet
30-may-2009  
Posted: 2017-10-30 16:19:43 UTC

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2009-09-01 02:06:02 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~
very nice.

2010-01-13 22:31:16Simply-Me-20104
WOW! I absolutely LOVE this poem!! It is so deep and heat-felt! Also, I admire the imagery in it. I can definately picture the story here and feel the emotion from it! Thank you SO much for all of your comments =] I really appreciate the support!