ThE SuNsEt RaIn..........

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By dispersed_sky

CeNtRaL IdEa---The sunset rain is the poem about the rain drops that came on 29-may-09 In my city (you can say that it was a motivation for me). It was quite pleasant dusk a perfect weather to write that poem. And furthermore it rained snowflake (I live in northern side of India where Himalayas prevent western winds to penetrate and cause snow flakes, it was not literally snow actually it was a frozen water that has taken a small sphere ball shape..) and my mood was awfully bad (or worst) I can’t explain …I wrote that poem at the dawn of 30 May 2009 but it was literary blackish shade all around and a best time to write that poem I don’t think so that its so deeply written but its the truth that I was in an emotional mood when I was writing it…… The Sunset rain The sun sets in the west With the hottest heat it had given But still something had its way ‘set’ Like a harmonious season Tiny-tiny pearl stars Jumped from the sky Like there was a war Between tines as they ‘fly’ I didn’t know what message they bought I didn’t care what were their destinations But something really special was sought Inside the little hearts station One tiny made its way to my side To tell something really special “We have had a gorgeous ride, From his home to your footsteps impression” I stared it as I didn’t believe I was hoping it’s a dream I was shivering ‘cause of half sleeves My tears started to flow like a stream I said to that tiny creature “I have my perception as well. You have a best feature, That I want you to tell. You have helped me to hide my biggest secret. Dear you help me to run that fear Only He knows the real reason, I regret, ‘Cause you are here to hide my tears Parampreet 30-may-2009

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September 1, 2009 02:06 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

very nice.

January 13, 2010 22:31Simply-Me-20104

WOW! I absolutely LOVE this poem!! It is so deep and heat-felt! Also, I admire the imagery in it. I can definately picture the story here and feel the emotion from it!
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