Who is this beautiful girl in my mirror?, by Your Everlasting
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I stand infront of my mirror.
I look at myself and see a girl.
I stand there looking at my mirror.
I blink twice so does the weird girl.
I tilt my head to the side.
So does she.
I say that I lied.
So did she.
I am hedious.
This girl is beautiful.
I am hedious.
This girl is wonderful.
I stood there and asked myself
what this beautiful girl was
doing here?It couldn't be myself,
but then I relized it was.
Even though I am monster!!!
By Your Everlasting |
Posted: 2009-06-04 04:22:39 UTC |
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2009-06-02 01:17:35 | Natural_beauty_Ashe |
i feel so mch oasion within this poem.and yes you are beautiful inside and out.you maybe everyone else around you cant see your beauty but you should be able too.maybe its not at the surface of you and it is deep within you but looking in the mirror haelped you to find it.i loved you poem.:) |
2009-06-03 16:28:33 | KayDe$ |
This is well written. I can relate too it because I feel like I am a monster but for some reason, when I look in the mirror, I see someone beautiful. Also in the third stanza, the last line, you forgot the "l" on girl. |
2009-06-26 17:06:45 | CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART |
this is so true, just how i feel, i see my beauty but dont believe its true. but u really are beautiful inside and out.. i love how u wrote it, amaazing |