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By Depressed_des •

Reaching for your answers just within your grasp Listening to your prayers, I hear you wheeze and rasp Watching the tears stream down your cold face Hoping agaisnt hope that you'll win the race Fighting so hard for what you believe Longing so badly for your pain to be relieved Wanting to tell you that things will be alright Knowing all to well that there will always be a fight Struggling to find yourself in your world of shame Loving you and holding you to make you forget the blame Crying out to be forgiven in this heartless cruel world I hold your heart in an icy glass which someone has hurled I feel so angry that you have been forgotten So i will always be here until the core is less rotten.

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April 14, 2005 16:45My_pain_your_thrill

Very good...are you ok? This is a really touching peice of writing. I like it.

April 14, 2005 19:11Depressed_des

thanks for the comment! Glad you thought it was touching. Are you okay? well i was when i wrote this, you see i like writing sad dark things. Although now i do feel genuinly sad and depressed as i have just got my GCSE marks back and i tried so hard, (they're kinda bad marks)its depressing and then when someone tried to be caring and supportive i basically threw it back in their face because i was angry so now i feel guilty too.
Anyway thanks for the feedback, take care xxx