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By izzy

i was just a step on the ladder i'm dead now the world gets madder a domino just waiting to fall sparking death to europe and all i wanted more than two voices had some ideas but no choices simpler concepts at least to me even fights two out of three a reason is all they lacked he looked so clean but his hand was painted black boom then the tires screech security quickly reaching breach Urban take the Apeel Quay but he took a right on Franz Joeseph Street he was walking from after his drink couldnt believe nor did he think as he saw me he reached to his hip didn't take aim unloaded a clip he only wanted me i turn to my poor injured Sophie a bullet lodged in my throat i still tried to have some hope darling don't die think of the children what comes after me get very chilling souls are lost in warfare time moves on it just doesn't care it keeps on passing by...

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July 7, 2009 12:00CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART

wow..this caught my attention right away, very very good..i loved it

July 10, 2009 08:04dispersed_sky

you are so good ....thnx for commenting

August 1, 2009 21:56Chalan

I thought this one was pretty good. Its words flowed so well and its written in such a way that a person could picture it happening in there mind! Well done. Thank you for you comments on my poems, "Broken" and "Our Love"

August 21, 2009 04:13Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*

wow this is very good! you are very talented