Wake Me

By Don't build lies on ice cubes. •
By Don't build lies on ice cubes. •
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Oh that is so sad. I love how you ended it with questions. It shows vulnerability and really makes the reader empathize. I know, I just commented on a different one of your poems...but seriously they're all so good!
Your poetry is so lyrical. These could easily become songs. Beautiful.
so a year has passed... thankfully I am no longer in pieces like I was when I wrote this.
you're right. these are two completely different poems, i was expecting something at least a little clost to my poem. this is good, i know how you feel, thank you for commenting.
By asking wake me..U actually woke me from my dream..and inspires me to write.