Wake Me

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By Don't build lies on ice cubes.

wake me up from this dream say my heart isnt breaking wake me up from this dream tell me my soul isnt aching wake me from the dream where i pine in my sleep wake me from the dream where shut eyes do weep wake me up now before i think it might be real wake me up now then love me still dont let me dream in a world all alone dont let me dream that our love wasnt known dreaming and i cant wake up hold me before its too late dreaming and i cant wake up dont let this be my fate why wont you wake me? by myself i cry why wont you wake me? just tell me why

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April 22, 2005 18:25Cutie In A Death Cab

Oh that is so sad. I love how you ended it with questions. It shows vulnerability and really makes the reader empathize. I know, I just commented on a different one of your poems...but seriously they're all so good!

May 24, 2005 05:18firebird

Your poetry is so lyrical. These could easily become songs. Beautiful.

October 18, 2005 09:04Don't build lies on ice cubes.

so a year has passed... thankfully I am no longer in pieces like I was when I wrote this.

November 1, 2005 13:17Finding Myself♥♥

you're right. these are two completely different poems, i was expecting something at least a little clost to my poem. this is good, i know how you feel, thank you for commenting.

September 30, 2010 12:55Bige.C.J

By asking wake me..U actually woke me from my dream..and inspires me to write.