The Romanticist

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By Don't build lies on ice cubes. •

Dont let salt embed this gash Simple looks with they eyes do lash Reverse the current towards upstream How a single love doth dream The first touch still lingers near If only they would return here Shadow of a girl left behind Plagued with thoughts of a different kind Merciless as she grasps at air Evisions the love that once stood there Within him twas all personified Honest truth in which she cried Through his manner love returned Least she knows the lessons learned Up high on a hill she sits to grieve Aware of betrayal she allowed to weave Friend has now become the foe Ignorance refused to let it show Throughout the day words do repeat Concentrated they surge with heat Gazes the direction in which he went Feelings emerge she would rather repent Now foe and he meander through time Justice calls it the near sublime Except a broken heart cannot heal Least until it endeavours to feel Yet how does one allow to be taught When from a fall can only be caught Perhaps in another shall find the key On contrare it is found within thee November 2004

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November 20, 2005 11:58~JaLeEsA lOvEs PoLkA dOtS~

Wow, you have really great poetry, very talented...& thanks for the feedback you gave me for my poem :)

August 12, 2008 14:24Tim Pozzi

Gorgeous poem, i love how your style is rooted in a more traditional kind of poetry, but uses phrasing that is sometimes more modern and relatable. Very nice work.