Blood on the sand

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By Invisible Poet •

People ignore me i like it that way people let me be Like i care what they say they dont know who i am on the inside they just dont give a dam and if they ever tried i would turn away and not take there hand i walk my own way i dissappear like blood in the sand I cannot be aided for i dont want assistance i would rather be hated and watched from a distance dont tell me im wrong when im talking about me let me sing my song and dont tell me who to be the blow comes fast and with my own hand i make a slash and bleed away like blood in the sand

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August 17, 2009 04:40Cortney shea.

wow this is very good. i love it!!!

August 17, 2009 04:50Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*

just like she said this is very good. i think its not a happy pom just like you said. but it is still good.

August 18, 2009 12:31Nutcracker

Excellent, thank you for sharing

August 18, 2009 15:19Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*

i have a new poem.. i dont think it is good. but tell me what u think

August 24, 2009 21:34Billy Joe

good i like it

September 6, 2009 01:52(darkkisses)

your a good poet:) you should check out my poems i think you would like them.