SUICIDES last thoughts, by (darkkisses) Subscribe to rss feed for (darkkisses)

I'm six feet under,
but I can still here 
the thunder.
I'm dead and gone,
but I can here the
deer playing outside.
I slit my wrist,
but I can still make
a fist.
where am I and what 
am I?
The bugs ate out my
eyes,
but I can still cri.
Should I cri for help?
will any one here me?
My body is going fast,
but has any time past?
my bones are weak,
do I still have any 
meat?
do I still have a heart 
beat?
is this what happens when
you kill yourself?
Is this suicide?
Posted: 2009-10-02 23:24:45 UTC

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2009-10-03 02:37:01sammygirl
good poem I wonder what ppl think when they are past away alot.

2009-10-11 01:13:55Butterfly
wow dis is a really good poem

2009-10-30 23:38:29Moon
Tis thee's epic well done.