Every Second's Valuable

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By Amber •

Staring at the clock Watching time pass you by. You’re thankful, Yet you wish it could go just a little Quicker. Enjoying yourself As the time passes you by. You’re thankful, Yet you wish it could go just a little Slower. Looking back at those times. How the years passed you by You’re thankful, Yet you wish it could have gone just a little Slower. Lying down, in pain How the time just passes you by. You’re thankful, Yet you wish it could go just a little Quicker. Surrendering, setting free How the time simply passes by. You’re thankful, Yet you wish you had just a little Longer.

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October 26, 2009 02:19~Angela~

Hey Amber!its me from school.I love your writing,it has fluency (in words).i used a different name 4 my reasons.good job-keep doin` what ur doin`.Rose(A.)

October 26, 2009 20:24~Angela~

im sorry.i thought you were somebody else i knew.sorry.forget i said what i did about school

October 26, 2009 20:24~Angela~

im sorry.i thought you were somebody else i knew.sorry.forget i said what i did about school

April 27, 2013 07:08Natural_beauty_Ashe

This is very nicely written....well done