Empty, Confused, Lost., by ~The Familiar Side of Strange~
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I feel so empty
Like I'm running on E
My mind is racing
I'm getting confused
I'm right where I belong
But, lost in a haze
Everything is on fast foward
While I'm stuck on pause
I see the simplicity around me
Yet, choas is ruling
I know where I'm going
But, not where I'm at
Fill the empty?!
Inform the confused?!
Find the lost?!
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i know this one is not my best lol. As you can tell I've
been stuck for awhile and this one just came to me so i had
to post. Please be honest dont be afraid to hurt in the
comments, if it truly sucks tell me :)
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| Posted: 2009-10-11 22:27:59 UTC |
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| 2009-10-22 06:49:42 | LostSoul |
| I loved it...honestly...enjoyed the rhythm of the words and the last stanza definitely awesome |
| 2009-11-08 02:20:12 | Lovecrafter |
| it's actuall quite awesome. it floats like normal train of thought |
| 2010-03-20 23:19:42 | Convalescence |
| It's really great. But I suggest to you the same thing that I had to do. Try writing something happy, even if you aren't feeling it. This is like.. being stuck in a rut, and you've gotta pull yourself out, though you don't feel that it's what you want. Just try it? |