Empty, Confused, Lost.

By ~The Familiar Side of Strange~ • October 11, 2009 22:27 UTC

I feel so empty Like I'm running on E My mind is racing I'm getting confused I'm right where I belong But, lost in a haze Everything is on fast foward While I'm stuck on pause I see the simplicity around me Yet, choas is ruling I know where I'm going But, not where I'm at Fill the empty?! Inform the confused?! Find the lost?! ___________________________________________________________ i know this one is not my best lol. As you can tell I've been stuck for awhile and this one just came to me so i had to post. Please be honest dont be afraid to hurt in the comments, if it truly sucks tell me :) ___________________________________________________________

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October 22, 2009 06:49LostSoul

I loved it...honestly...enjoyed the rhythm of the words and the last stanza definitely awesome

November 8, 2009 02:20Lovecrafter

it's actuall quite awesome. it floats like normal train of thought

March 20, 2010 23:19Convalescence

It's really great. But I suggest to you the same thing that I had to do. Try writing something happy, even if you aren't feeling it. This is like.. being stuck in a rut, and you've gotta pull yourself out, though you don't feel that it's what you want. Just try it?