Him, by Moon
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Why wont he tell me
What he feels for me
Well I guess its simple
To be nervous
I've had the feeling
And it happened today
I talked to him after school
In the band locker room
I was going to ask him
If he liked me
But I chickened out
Now he probably thinks I'm a fool
But hey I don't mind
I just wish he will tell me
What he feels inside
But I know how hard it is
To want say the words
But hey its just three of them
'I love you.'
But anyways I'll ask him tomorrow
Or maybe I wont
But you can't predict the future
It's not even ready for you
I promise that one day
I'll tell him the truth
It may not simple
But at least he'll know
Until then
Wish me luck
For I don't want
To end as a clutz |
Posted: 2009-11-01 01:17:10 UTC |
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2009-10-30 00:51:10 | izzy |
this is pretty good. i can relate to this in a way. hey, good luck |
2009-10-30 00:52:24 | Moon |
Almost all my poems someone can realate too oh nice poem 'bout Sarah |
2009-10-30 02:07:54 | ~Angela~ |
cool poem.loooooovvvvvvvvvve it!check out my other poems please. |
2009-10-30 02:13:37 | Moon |
Thx Rose. I wil promise. YAY. I have another idea for a poem!!!!! |
2009-11-07 12:49:27 | Chuck Shorter |
Did an eleven year old really write this? What amazing maturity of thought! Even though there's a strong emotion involved, the verse "'I love you.'
But anyways I'll ask him tomorrow
Or maybe I wont
But you can't predict the future
It's not even ready for you" is truly outstanding! keep up the great work Moon and shine down your lovely bright light the world over. GOD BLESS YOU my child. You are truly creative.
Love
Chuck Shorter
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2009-11-23 03:23:14 | Moon |
Wow...thanks |
2010-01-24 06:58:16 | California |
I can totally relate. This made me smile because i can totaly feel the way you do. Oh by the way' thanks for the comment on my poem "Love" ;) |
2010-02-08 03:31:48 | Moon |
Thx. Bloody 'Ell I haven't been in here in a looong time. I'll try to post some poems this week 'kay? |
2010-04-08 04:36:42 | ~Angela~ |
im sorry moon i was mean on that comment-please reply on 1 of my poems:( |
2010-06-28 16:39:37 | Moon |
Sorry, I've been busy with other stuff. I'll get to it today. |