Him

By Moon •
By Moon •
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this is pretty good. i can relate to this in a way. hey, good luck
Almost all my poems someone can realate too oh nice poem 'bout Sarah
cool poem.loooooovvvvvvvvvve it!check out my other poems please.
Thx Rose. I wil promise. YAY. I have another idea for a poem!!!!!
Did an eleven year old really write this? What amazing maturity of thought! Even though there's a strong emotion involved, the verse "'I love you.'
But anyways I'll ask him tomorrow
Or maybe I wont
But you can't predict the future
It's not even ready for you" is truly outstanding! keep up the great work Moon and shine down your lovely bright light the world over. GOD BLESS YOU my child. You are truly creative.
Love
Chuck Shorter
Wow...thanks
I can totally relate. This made me smile because i can totaly feel the way you do. Oh by the way' thanks for the comment on my poem "Love" ;)
Thx. Bloody 'Ell I haven't been in here in a looong time. I'll try to post some poems this week 'kay?
im sorry moon i was mean on that comment-please reply on 1 of my poems:(
Sorry, I've been busy with other stuff. I'll get to it today.