Him

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By Moon

Why wont he tell me What he feels for me Well I guess its simple To be nervous I've had the feeling And it happened today I talked to him after school In the band locker room I was going to ask him If he liked me But I chickened out Now he probably thinks I'm a fool But hey I don't mind I just wish he will tell me What he feels inside But I know how hard it is To want say the words But hey its just three of them 'I love you.' But anyways I'll ask him tomorrow Or maybe I wont But you can't predict the future It's not even ready for you I promise that one day I'll tell him the truth It may not simple But at least he'll know Until then Wish me luck For I don't want To end as a clutz

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October 30, 2009 00:51izzy

this is pretty good. i can relate to this in a way. hey, good luck

October 30, 2009 00:52Moon

Almost all my poems someone can realate too oh nice poem 'bout Sarah

October 30, 2009 02:07~Angela~

cool poem.loooooovvvvvvvvvve it!check out my other poems please.

October 30, 2009 02:13Moon

Thx Rose. I wil promise. YAY. I have another idea for a poem!!!!!

November 7, 2009 12:49Chuck Shorter

Did an eleven year old really write this? What amazing maturity of thought! Even though there's a strong emotion involved, the verse "'I love you.'
But anyways I'll ask him tomorrow
Or maybe I wont
But you can't predict the future
It's not even ready for you" is truly outstanding! keep up the great work Moon and shine down your lovely bright light the world over. GOD BLESS YOU my child. You are truly creative.

Love
Chuck Shorter

November 23, 2009 03:23Moon

Wow...thanks

January 24, 2010 06:58California

I can totally relate. This made me smile because i can totaly feel the way you do. Oh by the way' thanks for the comment on my poem "Love" ;)

February 8, 2010 03:31Moon

Thx. Bloody 'Ell I haven't been in here in a looong time. I'll try to post some poems this week 'kay?

April 8, 2010 04:36~Angela~

im sorry moon i was mean on that comment-please reply on 1 of my poems:(

June 28, 2010 16:39Moon

Sorry, I've been busy with other stuff. I'll get to it today.