You had to didn't you?

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By Moon

You stare at me As I stare at you On the couch Made for two Our parents watch us Right behind us In the shadows of the night The lights flicker off As the television flickers on We surf for a channel And find one we like It had a marathon of movies The scary type Good thing we weren't in the basement While it was dark Or else I'd be out of there in a snap We were to the end of the marathon All the other ones were cheesy But this one seemed good So we decided to watch it In the middle You could tell it was time You heard the music as you checked the clock The killer came out and I hid my face in his chest He smiled and kissed my forehead I looked up and it was done The lights flickered on And the parents were gone He finds a music channel And looks at me I close my eyes and listen to the beat He took my chin and brought it to his face Then pressed his lips to mine And a feeling of everlasting love Took over me We now are together forever and ever Always remembering that memory (this never happened to me)

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October 28, 2009 01:42Moon

This would be amazing if it were true. *sighs

October 30, 2009 02:45~Angela~

i like it.check my other stuff.

October 30, 2009 23:36Moon

I will I will

November 2, 2009 20:33*Broken Wings*

Very good poem, keep writing

November 3, 2009 01:50Moon

again thx

November 7, 2009 12:53Chuck Shorter

For a child who is yet to experience true love, this is an awesome piece of work! It clearly shows shrewd observation and understanding of life around us. I'm impressed to say the least. Way to go Moon!
Love
Chuck Shorter

November 12, 2009 01:44~Angela~

well fine moon! i guess you wont anymore,check my stuff.bye forever.

November 14, 2009 06:42//Stillsilent//

lol, i liked it until the "(this has never happened to me)" part....
it saddened me to know this adorable poem isnt true :(....anyway goodwork!!
i like it

November 23, 2009 03:24Moon

Thanks

December 7, 2009 23:30~Angela~

i thought you meant the bored ,agervated ``i will i will".nevermind the other comment

April 8, 2010 04:34~Angela~

check out my stuf:)-Rose!!