Life
By Moon •
What is life for?
I ask myself that
If we are just going to die
Then whats the point of life?
I wish we could know
For that I wold show
That life might be more
But does it feel so?
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November 7, 2009 13:04Chuck Shorter
I have tried to express the various stages of life in my poem. "Seasons and Emotions" as well as in "Transition". Young though you are, I'd be honored to have your feedback. This poem is nice. It's always worth ones while to ponder on the mysteries that surround life and the after life. Keep it up! However remember that a good life is not about dying, it's all about living the right way. I always say "LA DOLCE VITA!"
Love
Chuck Shorter
November 13, 2009 07:08Elizabeth
im just not feelin it but the meaning is awesome.
November 23, 2009 03:27Moon
lol thx again i have alot of comments to check