Pain, by Moon
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This pain is to much
When I think 'bout you
It crushes, my heart
When I look at you
My knees want to buckle
When I talk to you
I can't seem to tell you
That...
I like you
But its more than that
Oh way more
I actually think
That...
I love you
But when I do
It'll be much more
I hope
That...
What you say will be a yes
Do yoy love me?
Well do you?....
Because I do
That...
Is the truth
Now this may not be simple
But what I say is true
That...
I love you
Thank you |
| Posted: 2009-10-29 01:17:45 UTC |
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| 2009-10-30 01:30:28 | izzy |
| wow, i used to feel the same way about a girl and i told her how i felt and she told me she felt the same way. anyway this poem is very relatable, and it's really nicely written. good luck with your situation. |
| 2009-10-30 01:34:17 | Moon |
| Thank you Izzy... |
| 2009-11-03 04:53:17 | Hannah George |
| Yeah this is deep. True and relatable. I luv it, good work! |
| 2009-11-03 04:53:27 | Hannah George |
| Yeah this is deep. True and relatable. I luv it, good work! |
| 2009-11-03 09:55:15 | Moon |
| Thank you |
| 2009-11-23 03:27:48 | Moon |
| ty |
| 2010-05-01 04:43:11 | ~Angela~ |
| i c u moved on |