Pain

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By Moon •

This pain is to much When I think 'bout you It crushes, my heart When I look at you My knees want to buckle When I talk to you I can't seem to tell you That... I like you But its more than that Oh way more I actually think That... I love you But when I do It'll be much more I hope That... What you say will be a yes Do yoy love me? Well do you?.... Because I do That... Is the truth Now this may not be simple But what I say is true That... I love you Thank you

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October 30, 2009 01:30izzy

wow, i used to feel the same way about a girl and i told her how i felt and she told me she felt the same way. anyway this poem is very relatable, and it's really nicely written. good luck with your situation.

October 30, 2009 01:34Moon

Thank you Izzy...

November 3, 2009 04:53Hannah George

Yeah this is deep. True and relatable. I luv it, good work!

November 3, 2009 04:53Hannah George

Yeah this is deep. True and relatable. I luv it, good work!

November 3, 2009 09:55Moon

Thank you

November 12, 2009 16:55~Angela~

good poem

November 19, 2009 04:29sweetNsour

hmmmm so nice

November 23, 2009 03:27Moon

ty

May 1, 2010 04:43~Angela~

i c u moved on