Peddals

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By !!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

These pedals in my hand remind me of the love i once had. beautiful, delicate, soft, so sweet to every sense but know im only left with your lovely life's reminisce. holding on to everything that's left in my mind like a mad man grasping at the winds of time. though the depths of my heart hold you near i find im falling farther apart from you and my future so much more unclear for reality is so far from where you are so without you. Broken is how i must reside in side until i fall away wither and die

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November 10, 2009 21:02//Stillsilent//

very nice!!

November 11, 2009 03:30CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART

aw thats sad, and very sweet. i love it.

November 11, 2009 18:34//Stillsilent//

I love your poems they are beautiful!!
Thanx for ure comments!

December 19, 2009 22:00miss insashable

i can really relate to this poem, thanks for the comment on my poem.

June 4, 2010 11:32dispersed_sky

ur gud always....with feelings

February 27, 2011 08:05Natural_beauty_Ashe

I really enjoyed reading this