Sarah Jane Stole My Lines Again

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By Don't build lies on ice cubes.

Sarah Jane stole the show again She took away my part Sarah Jane read my lines again And with them she took his heart Mary Kate wore my dress And it looked much better on her Mary Kate I must confess She copied the way we were Jessica did much better than me She was given a higher score Jessica showed more ability And with it she left me sore Christina dyed her hair like mine Whilst my roots began to show Christina's hair, brighter did shine He was dazzled by the glow Zoe's make up was precise With her blue eyes and blackened lash Zoe's face would melt his ice While my own green eyes would flash Lauren pushed me to one side As she bounded toward the stand Lauren listened and you would confide Whilst I hadnt even given my hand Well I could have played that part, and I knew all the lines If it was the dress that won your heart Well if anything it was mine And I was having an off day, My scores are normally the best And I know my hair doesnt shine that way But believe me I try my best And green eyes sparkle far more bright If only given the chance These eyes of mine would have warmed the night They could have done it with just one glance So maybe Im not as strong I dont push myself to the front But i waited patiently so long I dont have the drive to win the hunt And i would have listened with great care Whenever you needed me too And with me anything you could share Likewise, id share my soul with you So apologies that this message is late Those other girls were more alert And if it was you who was my fate Well then its my own fault I am hurt

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April 22, 2005 18:16Cutie In A Death Cab

WOW! I think this poem is just spectacular. :) It's like, the best one I've read in a long time. You did a great job of allowing the reader share your emotions. My heart hurts! Lovely lovely.

June 19, 2005 12:42becky

this one is mi favourate!! i wanna make it into a song!! hehe

October 15, 2005 02:17 ♥ Break The Tradition

wow..amazing you've got such a talent with this ...maybe we could write a joint poem sometime? could be cool

January 26, 2006 21:42Spiritual Beauty

i like it

April 23, 2006 10:36Natalie

Hey I love it!

April 25, 2006 14:30XRebzX

Absolutely brilliant again!:)

May 17, 2006 20:14...

wow, this poem is just the best, well done, really!

March 10, 2007 09:29liberty moon

excuse my french this is freaking gr8. whoa this is a really one of da best poems i've read in a while. may God bless u

February 22, 2009 01:59connie

This is really good

September 30, 2010 12:44Bige.C.J

Very Nice ..