LOVE and PAIN

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By CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART

you told me you loved me everyday i wished i loved you the same way but no matter how hard i tried and no matter how much you lied it never worked Then out of the blue you said "i love you no more" but that was all before... before... i fell in love with you thats when i started to ask who knew? who knew... how much pain the one you love brings no matter how hard you try to make things right all that seems to be mising is that guideing light... the one u follow everyday the one that leads u the right way.. so you try ur hardest to keep him around but all he seems to do is lay on the ground. he doesnt reach for u hand the way you did he just lays there like a little kid you pout and u shout wishing he would give in... but all he is is a stupid mannequin

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November 5, 2009 00:17izzy

this is amazing, the ryhming is really good.

November 5, 2009 21:36CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART

thanx, it kinda just came out! :D

November 9, 2009 13:05//Stillsilent//

one of my favs!!
Good job!

November 9, 2009 22:01CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART

thank you very much

November 15, 2009 20:26StarStarlit

i really like this poem-its a gr8 poem nd i luv reading it-gr8 job! :)

November 16, 2009 00:30CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART

thank u! glad to hear that

All I can say is that this is beautifully written... I love it amazing job