THE ONE FOR ME

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By Chuck Shorter •

This poem is dedicated to my wife who is my truest friend. Sometimes a penny pincher At times a real nag - bag. Yet a munificent mother and a warm hearted lass. There's times I wanna punch her nose But I never will I guess. Cause Every time I needed Love, Only she said "Yes." When She's around it seems mundane But I miss her when she's out. That's when I long to hold her tight Or hear her angry shout! She never will express her love Maybe that's her gig. But in the quiet of the night, her hugs are warm and big! No real meter in her life Not to mention Rhyme! However, I want her by my side Until the end of time. CHUCK SHORTER

Current vote: 9.0 / 5

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November 8, 2009 04:48 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

for many reasons... I voted 9.
Your poem has a warm hearted flow like one that pours straight from the heart. I like the rhythm, rhyme. I especially like the last two lines. :) Great Job on this poem.

November 8, 2009 21:01Caitlin_Californication

I really like this one.

November 22, 2009 02:42Angel of Music

Chuck, first off I want to say think you for all you wonderful comments on my poetry, you are always very encouraging! second, I love this poem! your love for your wife is so clear, along with the joys and trials of love. as little as it is, your use of the word "lass" in the second line made me smile. God bless you and yours, Amanda

November 23, 2009 13:27Moon

Very very sweet Chuck.