If You Were Her

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By Lovecrafter

Would she dare To take what was given Without just cause? Would she flirt With the idea of Falling forever? Would she give Up on every thing She was promised? Would she die For a loving embrace Flying her home? Would she stand In the cold,painful rain Catching her tears? Would she love Just to be denied love Knowing the truth? If you were her And had her pain What would you do? Just so you know She would remain. Those of you who have read some of my other poems lately might have noticed how I have left little "please comment" messages. These are just a new thing I wanted to start, not cries for popularity . I might go into a writhing career one day, but I just need a little bit of feedback before I decide for sure. Just don't cuss me out. Okay, back to poem, if this inspired you in any way, leave a quick comment and go about your business.

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November 9, 2009 07:28//Stillsilent//

Deep.... Fantastic poem!!
Keep writing