Five Foot Too Small (NEVER)

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By Lovecrafter •

You would find it hard to believe That I woke up five feet too small But I swear I have nothing up my sleeve Whatever it was, I saw it all Dust bunnies under my bed box As if they are alive again Spiders chase after mites as if a fox Whatever the time, downstairs I ran Waking up in a wonderland Seemed a lot easier than forever I doubted that I would go back to bland I went running, singing "NEVER" Never had the world seen me Never had anything to see Never had the earth been free Never had something to be Then just as I was waking From what seemed like an eternity I saw the real me shaking My head at the mirror of no pity The few that have commented on this poem claim it reminds them of that cute little diddy "Fireflies". Do you agree with them? Just a yes or no will just be fine, but if you are so inclined to write a letter, feel free.

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November 17, 2009 23:56Azure Faye

This is so good! in some strange way, it reminds me of 'fireflies'. I love the rhyming. Rock on!Luv, Azure

November 18, 2009 04:55//Stillsilent//

oh, I absolutely love this, & it does remind me of fireflies.

February 3, 2010 00:00Knight Dallison

to me, its like alice in wonderland, a place to escape to...but we have to come back to reality and in that lays the problem...for poets can be troubled beings, but there is always a happiness to be found...take care...i love this one.