All Becuz Of U (rewrite)

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By StarStarlit

in my room, a sudden silence,i look out my room, to only see a brick wall ...i feel so alone, and yet so frightened, becoming quite paranoid, about the day i will fall ...i see my friends, all having fun while laughing, i sit and fake a smile, yet inside i'm only dyin'...i then walk home alone, look at others and stare, cause while they all have someone's hand to hold, i'm just here, sittin' and cryin' ...i remember the day he cheated on me,the day i lost my best friend,the day i lost my happiness, and started to live in the rain...but the real question is, why am i even ryming, it's only just such a pain...the main thing ...is that, after you left me... so did my world ...

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December 8, 2009 00:39izzy

this looks really cool and you did a good job writing it as well!

April 12, 2010 19:57~Angela~

AWESOME!!!howd u do that?ur so cool!!i luv how its the shape of a heart!!!tell ur friends about my poems!!!get them 2 comment!!thnx!!♥

April 14, 2010 22:24~Angela~

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