lost soul

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By angelbaby94

fear conqers our minds fear is something we won't find with a lost soul surrounding us and shadows of fear just know that were near of clouds of dust and hearts that won't trust we must find a cure thats kind and pure so a lost soul won't wonder then they can hear the thunder of sparks that shine and a drink of wine these lost soul won't fear and know that we are hear

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November 24, 2009 22:54StarStarlit

nice poem-i luv it-just one question...what if they dont kno u r there???

November 24, 2009 23:07StarStarlit

i do like ur poem tho-and u r a good poet lol :))

November 24, 2009 23:27StarStarlit

what i meant by the question was, there ARE MANYYY lost souls out there...and u say, "i can help them, and i will be there for them" but what if u cant, and even if u could, what if they didnt kno u were there for em...what if their problems were at least a little overwhelming...and no one...NO ONE could handle em, not because they dont care, but they dont kno wat to say anymore-and i just wanna kno, how would u handle it-would u turn them away? try and help? or fool them, and say ur there for them, but trust me, these people r waaayyy ahead of u sometimes, and they kno wat people will think-and it takes a real saint, or therapist, to calm them down-i kno this may not be wat u mean-and i am going over board, and this does look more like an essay than a comment, but there, i extended the question a thousand times...now answer it...

November 24, 2009 23:29StarStarlit

oh! and btw, i dont expect an answer...and if u do answer it, i will be surprised and memorize every word in the back of my mind-cuz THIS, i must never forget...

November 24, 2009 23:30StarStarlit

and u kno, tht the last sentence i wrote in my last comment, i was being sarcastic right??? lol...

November 28, 2009 22:09StarStarlit

srry 4 bein a bxtch b4-luv ya buddy :))