Let My Burden Be

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By izzy

i stand corrected alone again i walk this path back home is that really your life you're twisting the knife in my side is that pride or are you being naive just leave and come back in a month or two and tell me how you were wrong when you said we're through my liberty cracks under the pressure of proven facts these lies come in stacks im lost cannot back track to an earlier date you see a man that you hate and you mention his name politely why does it remind you of me you were more than touching beat my soul like some percussion instrument give me a small concussion and i say "hey whats with all the rushing" you were like my burden kept my sanity a burning and you mention how you love me i say oh just let my burden be

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November 28, 2009 17:13ma_chapa3xD

............... 0_0 ................ that is AWESOME! i love your style you must have a lot of experience with your feelings. haha ;) great izzy.

December 6, 2009 05:38~♥miss crazy♥~

like it and i like your style

December 11, 2009 01:40Emma_Bee

wow... i find it hard 2 ryme... but u make it seem easy

February 7, 2010 00:24Disruptive Silence

this is really, really good! very touching

October 28, 2010 22:07Sarah

thanks for the comment. and i really like this. it was really good

December 13, 2010 23:29raining smiles

Wow I this this is great(: I love how you used the wording(:

December 19, 2011 08:54Simply-Me-20104

Wow! Some really powerful flow in here! Great story and a great poem!