Let My Burden Be, by izzy
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i stand corrected alone
again i walk this path back home
is that really your life
you're twisting the knife
in my side
is that pride
or are you being naive
just leave
and come back
in a month or two
and tell me how you
were wrong when you said we're through
my liberty cracks
under the pressure of proven facts
these lies come in stacks
im lost cannot back track
to an earlier date
you see a man that you hate
and you mention his name politely
why does it remind you of me
you were more than touching
beat my soul like some percussion
instrument give me a small concussion
and i say "hey whats with all the rushing"
you were like my burden
kept my sanity a burning
and you mention how you love me
i say oh just let my burden be
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Posted: 2009-12-01 00:49:43 UTC |
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2009-11-28 17:13:30 | ma_chapa3xD |
............... 0_0 ................ that is AWESOME! i love your style you must have a lot of experience with your feelings. haha ;) great izzy. |
2009-12-11 01:40:12 | Emma_Bee |
wow... i find it hard 2 ryme... but u make it seem easy |
2010-10-28 22:07:19 | Sarah |
thanks for the comment. and i really like this. it was really good |
2010-12-13 23:29:06 | raining smiles |
Wow I this this is great(: I love how you used the wording(: |
2011-12-19 08:54:25 | Simply-Me-20104 |
Wow! Some really powerful flow in here! Great story and a great poem! |