Ending of her life

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By more then just that girl

Isnt it funny how she cries so loud but yet no one hears a sound Because she scared to open her mouth She puts on her makeup praying he wont wake up she says nothing bc she doesnt want people to worry even tho every night she tells him "please dont hurt me" with every hit she takes is another part of her tht breaks she lets him keep it up bc she knows it would be worse if she dare says "I've had enough" She prays every night believeing God will make it right They got into another fight but she refuses to cry Her bestfriend sees somethings wrong he keeps his mouth shut in fear its gone on to long She keeps her tears in check and her hair down over her neck with sunglasses on no one can see the things gone wrong She tried so hard to make herself right that what they said about him wasnt true but she knew they knew. his nights out late and cheating with Kate that night was her only escape She didnt pack her bags or take her purse. She didnt want anything of hers. She left his car and removed all the jewlry he made her wear. She didnt kno where she was going but she knew she couldnt be there. After he was gone and out of sight She smashed herself cellphone and ran outside. If she ran fast enough she could hide. Leaving all the things behind If he found her she knew that would be the end so she ran til she met her bestfriend He promised to get her far away he gave her a fone and made her promise to call he apologized many times for not seeing what was wrong Her bestfriend gave her the keys telling her to run That he'll tell her mom. not to turn back He tossed more money in the console telling her its time to go he told her to just drive dont stay anywhere more then a day promising to meet her in their spot 2 states away She wanted to go somewhere she felt safe thought she couldnt go home She called her mother and said "if its him dont answer the fone" She ran from the car to the hotel room a secret place her and her friend made to stow away but there he was in the door way. She tried to run but when it came to keepin her quite he always won She hit the wall and the lamp on the table fell off. Many things fell and crashed all the loud noises would only last. she knew what he was trying to do Her friend was a week away nothing she would do would help her today It all flashed and she was gone no one ever thought she would die alone at the funeral her friend dressed in black he cried all night bc he seen the end of her life.

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December 6, 2009 00:11izzy

wow! this is so sad but it was written really well.

December 24, 2009 21:57StarStarlit

this is extememly depressing but EXTREMEMLY BEAUTIFUL! i luv it so very much-but i pray that that story would be true for no one...but for some...sadly it has... gr8 job tho! :)