°Never Leave°

By xXJoshXx • April 23, 2005 02:39 UTC

A solitary mind of vegetation, full of corruption and enemy infultration. Stuck deep in this hibernation, an empty mind full of abrasion. The darkness and evil viewed through closed doors, a supposed perfect life turns to a war. A beautiful child bruised deep to the core, with now, nothing to live for. A legacy remembered, of a beautiful life made prisoner, now that you're gone, never surrender. Never be held captive by evil again, the life you never had, will now begin. Death will come, but who knows when? Never leave your life, until the end.

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May 3, 2005 23:42My_pain_your_thrill

I have to say....I do like this poem, I especially like how you havnt mentioned god in it...and I really like the last two lines, very good.

May 29, 2005 12:51XxXdevillaXxX

So sad yet so full of hope and joy this one makes me wanna cry! It really makes you see the positive side of her situation, knowing she's in a better place. This one really got to me! Terri would be proud! I am. Keep it up! Love ya!