By <font color=#FFFFFF>Convalescence</font> •
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I like it! It starts sorta sad, though. 'Course, so does my new one. Let me know what you think, okay?
cool poem!!i luv this stuff.ya no-this is a good web site.we r so lucky 2 have this website,b/c how would we get any feedback from anybody if we kept this or our poems to ourselves!!how would anybody enjoy them?we need 2 real ize that this is a free writing website!we can do wateva we want on here.no matter how bad or good our poems r,at least here people notice them!i mean i want really u other people 2 anser this-how many of you actually let the world read ur poems at 1 time?or how many of u had the courage 2 let ur friends c them?or even how many of u didnt pass english or writing class because u couldnt write a story right or a poem really good?--and can u acheive all these things now?OF COURSE!!!u can type better,u write better,u get encouraged by other people including ur friends to c the beauty u own in writing,u can expresss ur feelings here and nobody has 2 read them!!!so next x u write a poem-think about ALL of this-how goood of a writer u r now than u used 2 b-and how great it is 2 have people from all over the world read them,and n joy them!!!i think ive said plenty of enough-maybe more but u need 2 get my point,and by now at the end of this article,u should.have a great day 2 all of u ,and once again to RECURRANCE-great poem!!!-bye-Rose Alt #3
i love this it shows we all have a place to be safe, to be ourselves, to be us. i mean it really is good!
THIS IS REALLY GOOD I LIKE IT