°No Title°, by xXJoshXx
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Titled as crazy and dangerous,
never smart and couragious.
So I'm...
Ripping my seams,
watching me bleed.
Blood drip dropping like rain.
Veins twitching during the drain.
Watching hoplessly as I die.
Hard to breathe,
only a strong sigh.
A sigh of death,
because I lost my breath.
I'm gone forever.
So no title,
would've been better. |
| Posted: 2005-04-25 08:45:33 UTC |
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| 2005-05-02 21:52:07 | Gina |
| loved it! its so different, and its hard to be different these days! it was unique and i felt... an ache as i read this. an ache as in a good ache... i think... anyway, good portrayal of emotion and struggle, loved it! |
| 2005-05-03 23:46:49 | My_pain_your_thrill |
| Ok, please email me ([email protected]) I really like this poem, but it confuses me..is it about you self harming? Or about wanting to die? Coz isnt suicide a sin? How can you go on about god all the time if you sin? |
| 2005-05-29 12:40:46 | XxXdevillaXxX |
| I love this one! You write alot of poems like th but i think this one handles that topic the best. It really captures what just what you were going for. You've grown and matured alot in your writing since those though. That's probably why this one is the best of all those. I'm a fan! keep it up! Love ya! |
| 2005-10-13 08:29:04 | xXJoshXx |
| My_Pain_Your_Thrill---This song is about peoples bad opinions of me and how they make me out to be a bad person, it's about the emotional pain they cause me. |