I just dont understand, by "That Girl"
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I didnt think It would happen
How could I have been so nieve
To think this would never happen
But it has, and you will forget me
And I will be here, crying for you
I helped you so much
And now your gonna be gone, to leave me with no one
How could you do this?
Why would you do this?
I just dont understand! |
| Posted: 2005-04-25 14:14:19 UTC |
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| 2005-07-07 04:45:28 | Lost~N~lonely |
| I think thats a great poem but not really decriptive even though i understood it , it just needs more its sorta like telling only half of a story. great write. |
| 2005-11-16 23:21:37 | Crimson_Tide915 |
| It's plain get deeper into it feel your poems. Don't just write about the first things that you think about its not always about that. Keep going though you'll get better. You can look at mine for a refrence but i dont know if your into that kind of stuff -John |
| 2005-11-16 23:22:12 | Crimson_Tide915 |
| It's plain get deeper into it feel your poems. Don't just write about the first things that you think about its not always about that. Keep going though you'll get better. You can look at mine for a refrence but i dont know if your into that kind of stuff -John |
| 2006-02-17 03:41:09 | Love Dragon |
| I think that this poem is sort of sad. I was left once never got one letter phone call nothing. I now how you feel. |
| 2009-10-03 15:03:50 | Reverend Rhonda |
| Jesus Christ our dearest friend...
He sticks closer than a brother...
In his word it is written....
"I will never leave thee nor forsake thee"
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