By "That Girl" •
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I really relate to this poem, I think everybody can...
I think thats a great poem but not really decriptive even though i understood it , it just needs more its sorta like telling only half of a story. great write.
It's plain get deeper into it feel your poems. Don't just write about the first things that you think about its not always about that. Keep going though you'll get better. You can look at mine for a refrence but i dont know if your into that kind of stuff -John
It's plain get deeper into it feel your poems. Don't just write about the first things that you think about its not always about that. Keep going though you'll get better. You can look at mine for a refrence but i dont know if your into that kind of stuff -John
I think that this poem is sort of sad. I was left once never got one letter phone call nothing. I now how you feel.
i like it but its missing something
Jesus Christ our dearest friend...
He sticks closer than a brother...
In his word it is written....
"I will never leave thee nor forsake thee"
I like it because i am going through the same thing right now