"A life without you", by brad1990
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A life without you is like:
The oceans without water,
Just another stupid hole in the ground.
A life without you is like:
The night sky without the stars or the moon,
Just hours of Darkness.
A life without you is like:
A book without words,
Blank
A life without you is like:
A car without fuel,
Useless
But most importantly
A life without you is like:
Me without lungs,
DEAD!! |
| Posted: 2010-02-01 19:33:35 UTC |
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| 2010-02-08 03:46:25 | Moon |
| Deep man, Deep. Awesome job!
XXXXMoon |
| 2010-02-08 20:13:36 | brad1990 |
| thanks it was my first poem ever |
| 2010-02-15 22:40:03 | KK |
| This is the kind of poem that I've been looking for. It's kind of how I need to explain how I feel. |
| 2010-02-21 19:28:58 | brad1990 |
| wow glad i could help |
| 2010-06-24 04:22:02 | your shining star |
| i like the repetition, and the similes were very strong! nice! |