"A life without you"

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By brad1990

A life without you is like: The oceans without water, Just another stupid hole in the ground. A life without you is like: The night sky without the stars or the moon, Just hours of Darkness. A life without you is like: A book without words, Blank A life without you is like: A car without fuel, Useless But most importantly A life without you is like: Me without lungs, DEAD!!

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February 8, 2010 03:46Moon

Deep man, Deep. Awesome job!
XXXXMoon

February 8, 2010 20:13brad1990

thanks it was my first poem ever

February 15, 2010 22:40KK

This is the kind of poem that I've been looking for. It's kind of how I need to explain how I feel.

February 21, 2010 19:28brad1990

wow glad i could help

June 24, 2010 04:22your shining star

i like the repetition, and the similes were very strong! nice!