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By Simply-Me-20104 •

You have me locked in a bind I can't get free You bring me so far down Just let me be You're holding me back Please just let me go I'm strong enough To take life's blow I can't take it anymore I can't be tied down All of my life I've just been bound Held back from life In a cold, dark cage Familiar to so much Hate, anger, pain, and rage Like a wild horse Please set me free Release my reins And just let me be. 2-12-2010

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April 11, 2010 17:48dispersed_sky

dear gurl sorry i didn't got time to comment on your poetry or wordings as i was tooooooooooo busy in the intricate life.....i don't know how to expressmy feeling towards this poetry slice ,i mean its good .............i..i m lacking words actually young lady ur too good to appreciate....{:D}...i don't know what m saying but still i like ur writing as i said earlier oso...i'll b ecstasly waitin for your reply.......
GOD BLESS YOU!!!!!!!!!